hey matze This text is very short and you can give more informations about the second chapter!!! You can write more about your thoughts or the shocked/excited moments which he had in the 2nd chapter. You have only one sentence about the content of the chapter. See you
Sorry, but as a summery it's also to short as a personal meaning or something. What's about your opinion not to mention that you haven't write any feelings, althougt there's so much to tell. My advise for the next time: Write just a little about story, you should comment about your feelings and what you liked or don't like or imagine you're one of the persons, what would you do? I KNOW your next text will be better. ;)
Hey matthias, I think you don't answer the question, what mis. karstädt give us. You should write more about Alex 66hours in OZ. You shouldn't write a very short text, also don't write a very very long text. Put some picture in your blog and then your blog will be a little bit happier. :-)
I'm sorry but it seem that you haven't really understand the text or you misunderstand that this task was abot: We should write down our feelings and thougts so we are able to understand your opinion. Unfortunately it's incomprehensible why reading the text is for you ,,good" and otherwise is good a very inppropriate word for describing feelings. Why have you written a so short post, if there are questions you can ask always others. And here an extra advise: If you haven't understand a text read some other posts and the main facts will become clear (of course that's no direction to copy some other posts). But I looking nevertheless forward to your next post.
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hey matze
This text is very short and you can give more informations about the second chapter!!! You can write more about your thoughts or the shocked/excited moments which he had in the 2nd chapter. You have only one sentence about the content of the chapter.
See you
Sorry, but as a summery it's also to short as a personal meaning or something. What's about your opinion not to mention that you haven't write any feelings, althougt there's so much to tell. My advise for the next time: Write just a little about story, you should comment about your feelings and what you liked or don't like or imagine you're one of the persons, what would you do? I KNOW your next text will be better. ;)
hey mtthias,
i think that this text is to sort too, because you did not wrote the most important things. bad.
Hey matthias,
I think you don't answer the question, what mis. karstädt give us. You should write more about Alex 66hours in OZ. You shouldn't write a very short text, also don't write a very very long text. Put some picture in your blog and then your blog will be a little bit happier. :-)
I'm sorry but it seem that you haven't really understand the text or you misunderstand that this task was abot: We should write down our feelings and thougts so we are able to understand your opinion. Unfortunately it's incomprehensible why reading the text is for you ,,good" and otherwise is good a very inppropriate word for describing feelings. Why have you written a so short post, if there are questions you can ask always others. And here an extra advise: If you haven't understand a text read some other posts and the main facts will become clear (of course that's no direction to copy some other posts). But I looking nevertheless forward to your next post.
Peace Matze
where are your three questions... homework?
Hey!
Where are the three questions?!
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